I believe that women have made a great deal of change
throughout the years. Women are steadily
climbing the ladder in the work field and are taking over every few years. Females also are about to take over the world
if they already aren’t secretly, behind closed doors. This article shows women have made a great
change for the better in the work area but, also the education field. “Wife who is the sole breadwinner in a record
twenty – three percent of families, in 1976, the number was six percent”. Even though men have been looked upon on a
higher level than women throughout the years women have been on steady rise to
get on that same level. “USA TODAY
analysis of census bureau data reveals a revolution in the traditional roles of
men and women that extends from college campus to the workplace…” This piece in the passage proves my thesis to
be exactly correct. A woman being
soldier and men staying at home is becoming a natural thing in today’s society,
from the minds of those in those in the 1950’s this would be shocking. My paragraph can be proven word for word
almost in paragraph three, so I think the thesis statement I have come out with
is very accurate. “Just as telling,
wives out earn their husbands twenty-eight percent of the time”. This is more to show you that women are
actually climbing the ladder of today’s work area or career statuses. “40 year old Kim Sprint… got pregnant during
her freshmen year at Harvard… her hard working mother a military veteran…
insisted she not drop out of college”.
Let’s break this down piece by piece, first Kim is forty now so when she
was younger women were still not looked upon as being able to do a lot of
things like be a freshmen at Harvard with a baby. This leads to her mom who is hard working
military vet. This was nearly impossible to come by back in those days. Why am
I stating all these facts? Because women
have always been on the level of men since forever they just were not able to
showcase their talents because the ways of males who need to be in control of
thing like households and army missions. How were women ever on the level of
men back in the day you might ask? Kim and her mother are prime examples,
educational field; Kim went to one of the top Ivy League schools in the nation. Work area; her mom was a veteran in the
military which a lot of men can’t become because they’re not cut out; also Kim
is a sales manager at one of the top shipping companies in the world. Even though this a passage about male
reversal I think it shouldn’t be question who’s on what level in society,
because most of the teachers I see are women most friends I have only have a
mom, and without a woman no one human on the earth would exist. So I don’t
think the title should be “An American Role Reversal: Women the new
Breadwinners” but “An Worldwide Phenomenon: Women and the things they’ve being
doing”
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